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Who could tell the hell within?
Rule of thumb don’t be an open book.
Beneath a clear sky, a troubled heart,
Very few took time to look.
No TV drama or serial here,
A channel of a different kind,
Life as is, not heaven sent,
None could see more than the blind.
What is truth, where is the lie?
Urgency strikes that final blow,
Trickles infinitely, back and forth,
As a tide will ebb and flow.
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Love the flow of this one! The line “What is truth, where is the lie?” is the heart of man’s discontent!
Difficult words, but you did it
‘None could see more than the blind.’ I think this is the state of society these days…so many watching, none seeing!
Thanks for commenting. Looking without seeing is the norm
“None could see more than the blind”
This is a perfect poem, Di!