Sunday Whirl Wordle #582

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rule, open, sky, beneath, within, hell, heaven, flow, channel, urgency, time, serial

Who could tell the hell within?
Rule of thumb don’t be an open book.
Beneath a clear sky, a troubled heart,
Very few took time to look.
No TV drama or serial here,
A channel of a different kind,
Life as is, not heaven sent,
None could see more than the blind.
What is truth, where is the lie?
Urgency strikes that final blow,
Trickles infinitely, back and forth,
As a tide will ebb and flow.


About pensitivity101

I am a retired number cruncher with a vivid imagination and wacky sense of humour which extends to short stories and poetry. I love to cook and am a bit of a dog whisperer as I get on better with them than people sometimes! In November 2020, we lost our beloved Maggie who adopted us as a 7 week old pup in March 2005. We decided to have a photo put on canvas as we had for her predecessor Barney. We now have three pictures of our fur babies on the wall as we found a snapshot of Kizzy, my GSD when Hubby and I first met so had hers done too. On February 24th 2022 we were blessed to find Maya, a 13 week old GSD pup who has made her own place in our hearts. You can follow our training methods, photos and her growth in my blog posts. From 2014 to 2017 'Home' was a 41 foot narrow boat where we made strong friendships both on and off the water. We were close to nature enjoying swan and duck families for neighbours, and it was a fascinating chapter in our lives. We now reside in a small bungalow on the Lincolnshire coast where we have forged new friendships and interests.
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8 Responses to Sunday Whirl Wordle #582

  1. murisopsis says:

    Love the flow of this one! The line “What is truth, where is the lie?” is the heart of man’s discontent!

  2. Nope, Not Pam says:

    Difficult words, but you did it

  3. Stacy MS says:

    ‘None could see more than the blind.’ I think this is the state of society these days…so many watching, none seeing!

  4. “None could see more than the blind”

    This is a perfect poem, Di!

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