What I saw …

All you need is love.
If only it was enough. Beautiful piece.

Keith's Ramblings

I wrote this piece five years ago and it was read by just a handful of people.  I’ve been waiting for the chance to use it again – then Sadje’s What Do You See? challenge floated into view!  I’m not going to attempt an audio version for reasons which will doubtless become apparent!




A girl sits alone on a pebbled beach.  The sea, as still as a millpond.  She floats a flickering candle on the water. 

‘All you need is love’ she whispers.

One by one, townsfolk join her.  ‘All you need is love’  they sing as the candle drifts away.

Somewhere in Russia, a devushka wanders into a square clutching a candle.  Minutes later the square is filled with people singing.  ‘Vse, chto tebe nuzhno – eto lyubov’.  All you need is love.

Across the Latin world, joyful crowds gather.  ‘Todo lo que necesitas es amor’ they…

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I am a retired number cruncher with a vivid imagination and wacky sense of humour which extends to short stories and poetry. I love to cook and am a bit of a dog whisperer as I get on better with them than people sometimes! In November 2020, we lost our beloved Maggie who adopted us as a 7 week old pup in March 2005. We decided to have a photo put on canvas as we had for her predecessor Barney. We now have three pictures of our fur babies on the wall as we found a snapshot of Kizzy, my GSD when Hubby and I first met so had hers done too. On February 24th 2022 we were blessed to find Maya, a 13 week old GSD pup who has made her own place in our hearts. You can follow our training methods, photos and her growth in my blog posts. From 2014 to 2017 'Home' was a 41 foot narrow boat where we made strong friendships both on and off the water. We were close to nature enjoying swan and duck families for neighbours, and it was a fascinating chapter in our lives. We now reside in a small bungalow on the Lincolnshire coast where we have forged new friendships and interests.
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5 Responses to What I saw …

  1. Very beautiful, thanks for sharing that with me! 😀

  2. Carol anne says:

    Wow! This was beautiful! ❤

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