Deja vu

Sadje is our hostess for the What Do You See challenge.
This week’s image is courtesy of Linus Sandvide@ Unsplash
( For the visually challenged reader, the image shows back of a man who is standing in a dark medieval entrance holding a flaming torch in his hand)


I have a feeling,
A sense of déjà vu,
I’ve been here before,
I was chasing you:
You turned into shadows,
My torch lit the way,
I held it aloft
To keep darkness at bay.
Where did you go?
You can’t just disappear,
I hear you and follow,
Keep ending up here!
Now you are teasing,
Your echoed laughter calls
But all I can see
Are these thick rocky walls.
I’ve been here before,
I just can’t recall when,
And can’t help but wonder
If I’ll come back again.

Note:
I felt I had seen this picture before.
This was my original take.
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About pensitivity101

I am a retired number cruncher with a vivid imagination and wacky sense of humour which extends to short stories and poetry. I love to cook and am a bit of a dog whisperer as I get on better with them than people sometimes! We have recently lost our beloved dog Maggie who adopted us as a 7 week old pup in March 2005. We decided to have a photo put on canvas as we had for her predecessor Barney, and now have three pictures of our fur babies on the wall as we found a snapshot of my GSD so had hers done too. From 2014 to 2017 'Home' was a 41 foot narrow boat where we made strong friendships both on and off the water. We were close to nature enjoying swan and duck families for neighbours, and it was a fascinating chapter in our lives. We now reside in a small bungalow on the Lincolnshire coast where we have forged new friendships and interests.
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13 Responses to Deja vu

  1. Sadje says:

    Very unique take on the prompt Di. Thanks for joining in

  2. Beautiful – absolutely beautiful!!

  3. murisopsis says:

    I just LOVE the flow of this one! It trips off the tongue and is so fun to read aloud!!

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