Friday Fictioneers 16th October

Once again a big thank you to Rochelle for hosting the Friday Fictioneers Challenge.
The photo this week is courtesy of  © C.E.Ayr
‘You lied to me, said you had a boat.’
‘I did not lie. I do have a boat, just not the kind of boat you imagined.’
‘I had visions of cruises and top deck sun bathing.’
‘Yeah, well, you can have a cruise, but the sunbathing might need a bit of work.
Besides, you also kinda lied too………..’
‘How so?’
‘You said you had a bike………’
‘I do, just not the kind of bike you imagined.’
Realising what she had just said, the pair linked arms and burst out laughing.
‘Just think what we can tell our grandchildren!’

98 words.

About pensitivity101

I am a retired number cruncher with a vivid imagination and wacky sense of humour which extends to short stories and poetry. I love to cook and am a bit of a dog whisperer as I get on better with them than people sometimes! We have an elderly dog called Maggie who adopted us as a 7 week old pup in March 2005. From 2014 to 2017 'Home' was a 41 foot narrow boat where we made strong friendships both on and off the water. We were close to nature enjoying swan and duck families for neighbours, and it was a fascinating chapter in our lives. We now reside in a small bungalow on the Lincolnshire coast where we have forged new friendships and interests.
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35 Responses to Friday Fictioneers 16th October

  1. neilmacdon says:

    They’ll get on just fine

  2. James McEwan says:

    You said you had grandchildren, well just not the what you thought. I like the humour.

  3. bearmkwa says:

    that one brought a smile and a chuckle. Something I can imagine happening between my Hubby and I. LOL! 🙂 ❤

  4. It’s nice to see such a happy couple

  5. pennygadd51 says:

    They sound like a couple with the potential for happiness. Always good to be aware of your own faults and able to laugh at them. Nice story.

  6. I love that story. I like how you turned it around with both people.

  7. Sadje says:

    Haha! Good story Di

  8. Sandra says:

    They’re meant for each other.

  9. Absolutely delightful Di!

  10. Carol anne says:

    Lol 😀 love it Di! 😛

  11. I love this one! Great dialogue and relationship.

  12. Dale says:

    A match made in not-quite-lying heaven!!

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