Fandango’s Flash Fiction Challenge #74

The image below is from Google Hub Photo Frame, and has been chosen by Fandango for his challenge this week.

For the visually challenged writer, the image shows large rocks and a single tree extending out from the shore, with the moon hanging low in the evening sky reflected in the calm sea waters.

‘It’s almost perfect, but something is missing,’ she said.
‘No, I like it as it is, relaxing and clear. ‘
‘Yes but the desert island wasn’t intended to be waterlogged.’
‘Doesn’t matter. It’s still refreshing.’
‘What about some stars in the sky?’
‘Nope. It’s not dark enough, and the moon deserves the glory.’
‘Well, there’s still something missing.’
Snapping her fingers, she said
‘I know! You want a boat on the horizon!’
‘Are you crazy? I want a paradise that is NOT cocked up by people!’
Reaching down, the two young Gods stirred the waters and the chocolate ‘rocks’ began to melt just as their Mother yelled at them to stop playing with their food.

About pensitivity101

I am a retired number cruncher with a vivid imagination and wacky sense of humour which extends to short stories and poetry. I love to cook and am a bit of a dog whisperer as I get on better with them than people sometimes! We have an elderly dog called Maggie who adopted us as a 7 week old pup in March 2005. From 2014 to 2017 'Home' was a 41 foot narrow boat where we made strong friendships both on and off the water. We were close to nature enjoying swan and duck families for neighbours, and it was a fascinating chapter in our lives. We now reside in a small bungalow on the Lincolnshire coast where we have forged new friendships and interests.
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9 Responses to Fandango’s Flash Fiction Challenge #74

  1. Right about now I’d like that kind of paradise too….

  2. Lol 😂😂😂
    That’s a good one, Di

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