Sunday Photo Fiction – May 17 2020

Jerry was so excited, Miranda thought he would burst, and now his surprise was ready to be revealed.
‘I’m going to show you Paris!’ he announced.
Miranda was thrilled. It was her fortieth birthday and she’d always wanted to go to Paris, the city of romance.
Hugging Jerry she asked when they would leave.
‘We can go anytime you like. How about now?’
‘Great!’ and she disappeared upstairs.
Half an hour later, Jerry stuck his head round the door and asked
‘What are you doing?’
‘Packing of course, silly.’
Miranda said ‘We’re going to Paris!’
‘We are?’
Laughing nervously, Miranda stopped what she was doing.
‘Y-eeesss. That’s what you said.’
‘Ah. You’d better look out of the window……………’

Written for Donna McNicol’s Sunday Photo Fiction challenge


About pensitivity101

I am a retired number cruncher with a vivid imagination and wacky sense of humour which extends to short stories and poetry. I love to cook and am a bit of a dog whisperer as I get on better with them than people sometimes! In November 2020, we lost our beloved Maggie who adopted us as a 7 week old pup in March 2005. We decided to have a photo put on canvas as we had for her predecessor Barney. We now have three pictures of our fur babies on the wall as we found a snapshot of Kizzy, my GSD when Hubby and I first met so had hers done too. On February 24th 2022 we were blessed to find Maya, a 13 week old GSD pup who has made her own place in our hearts. You can follow our training methods, photos and her growth in my blog posts. From 2014 to 2017 'Home' was a 41 foot narrow boat where we made strong friendships both on and off the water. We were close to nature enjoying swan and duck families for neighbours, and it was a fascinating chapter in our lives. We now reside in a small bungalow on the Lincolnshire coast where we have forged new friendships and interests.
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10 Responses to Sunday Photo Fiction – May 17 2020

  1. xine133 says:

    Loved this! I could so see this happening.

  2. Sadje says:

    Haha, good one!

  3. willowdot21 says:

    I don’t reckon much to his chances of survival 💜💜💜

  4. I was just waiting for the wife’s disappointment 🙂 Nice one

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