Friday Fictioneers: 4th October 2019

Once again thanks to Rochelel Wisoff-Fields for this regular challenge.
You can find out more here:
https://rochellewisoff.com/

Our picture this week is provided by Dale Rogerson.
Alone and lonely, she sat in the park of her youth and remembered.
Remembered happy days of swings and roundabouts, screams of glee, delighted laughter, the security of a warm embrace and strong arms.
The tears fell.
‘Show me a sign.’ she begged inwardly. ‘Give me a reason to believe you are watching over me.’
Minutes passed and the night lights came on, one brighter than the rest with an added glow of intensity. Two signs warped, one depicting open arms to greet another walking head bowed into them.
She felt their warmth and knew she was no longer alone.

About pensitivity101

I am a retired number cruncher with a vivid imagination and wacky sense of humour which extends to short stories and poetry. I love to cook and am a bit of a dog whisperer as I get on better with them than people sometimes! We have an elderly dog called Maggie who adopted us as a 7 week old pup in March 2005. From 2014 to 2017 'Home' was a 41 foot narrow boat where we made strong friendships both on and off the water. We were close to nature enjoying swan and duck families for neighbours, and it was a fascinating chapter in our lives. We now reside in a small bungalow on the Lincolnshire coast where we have forged new friendships and interests.
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21 Responses to Friday Fictioneers: 4th October 2019

  1. bearmkwa says:

    That is an awesome story, brought tears to my eyes just reading it.

  2. Iain Kelly says:

    Definitely a sign. Touching story Di.

  3. Beautiful. Yep, that qualifies as a sign … πŸ™‚

  4. Sadje says:

    Love your take on the photo.

  5. Such a poignant piece. Beautifully written Di.

  6. Dear Di,

    You had no reason to worry if this story made sense. It does. Beautifully.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  7. draliman says:

    Touching, I’m glad she got her sign.

  8. Dale says:

    I felt a tightening in my chest reading this, Di. Beautifully done.

  9. granonine says:

    How comforting that would be! I believe God does allow us some sign of hope in our greatest grief. It may take awhile for us to see it.

  10. Yes, I’d call that a definite sigh, A good story, Di. πŸ™‚ — Suzanne

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