Friday Fictioneers: 24th May

This week Rochelle has selected a photo from J Hardy Carroll

Nimmi had been looking forward to her friend’s party all week.
Her Mamma had made her a new dress, and she understood there would be lots of lovely things to eat and games to play.
She had heard they had pin the tail on the donkey which was her favourite.
On arrival, she saw a real donkey in her friend’s field and got a bit nervous!
Turned out he would be providing rides for the guests later.

77 words

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About pensitivity101

I am a retired number cruncher with a vivid imagination which extends to short stories and poetry. I love to cook and am a bit of a dog whisperer as I get on better with them than people sometimes! Due to a nightmare of a house sale in 2014, 'Home' was a 41 foot narrow boat until April 2017. We made strong friendships both on and off the water, and enjoyed swan and duck families for neighbours. Sadly times change and we now reside in a small bungalow a short distance from the beach on the Lincolnshire coast.
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31 Responses to Friday Fictioneers: 24th May

  1. Iain Kelly says:

    Thank goodness no pins were involved! πŸ™‚

  2. Sweet portrayal from the view point of a child. πŸ™‚

  3. Tessa says:

    Ah, this one is similar to mine. I had a real donkey too for them to ride. LOL! Great story.

  4. I bet the nerves turned to excitement in no time! Delightful.

  5. draliman says:

    Aw, bless πŸ™‚ No donkeys will be harmed during the writing of this story.

  6. granonine says:

    Nimmi has a soft heart. Very sweet story πŸ™‚

  7. The literal minds of children! Great stuff

  8. Dale says:

    This was a lovely one, Di.

  9. I enjoyed this one.
    (Lincolnshire coast? Don’t read Bjorn’s piece unless your canal boat is still available.)

  10. James McEwan says:

    I enjoyed this, it shows how a child’s mind can get confused.

  11. It was a relief to get that straightened out. A good story and well written, Di. πŸ™‚ — Suzanne

  12. bearmkwa says:

    Littles do tend to take things literally…. good thing someone caught her in time. It would be a shame to see a flying “nimmi”. Great story.

  13. Abhijit Ray says:

    A donkey ride! For all guests or only the losers in the game? It is a surprise!

  14. Haha, yes, I would be a bit wary about trying to pin a tail on a live donkey

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