May Speculative Fiction #Writing prompt

Thanks to Diana Wallace Peach of Myths of the Mirror for our May photoprompt.

For visually challenged writers, this is an image of a man who is part human and part machine. Behind him are gears and wires as well as a hint of fire or electricity.
Pixabay image by Brigitte Werner

The Awakening

He had nothing when he volunteered for the program.
No family, no prospects, no home, no ties. He was perfect.
They had tapped into his memory and deleted all knowledge of his former life.
Over the years, they had removed, improved and replaced vital components of his body.
By trial and error, he was practically indestructible now, one of a hundred ‘ideal soldiers’ of the future who would obey their superiors without question or conscience.
Each stood sedated in the ranks ready to strike when the time was right.
No-one noticed when he woke up and, flexing his golden muscles, began to test his new power.
‘Nice…………..’ flashed up on his mind monitor and was gone in an instant.

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About pensitivity101

I am a retired number cruncher with a vivid imagination which extends to short stories and poetry. I love to cook and am a bit of a dog whisperer as I get on better with them than people sometimes! Due to a nightmare of a house sale in 2014, 'Home' was a 41 foot narrow boat until April 2017. We made strong friendships both on and off the water, and enjoyed swan and duck families for neighbours. Sadly times change and we now reside in a small bungalow a short distance from the beach on the Lincolnshire coast.
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25 Responses to May Speculative Fiction #Writing prompt

  1. Oh, nice one! Sci-fi works perfectly. I like the little twist there as he wakes up, has a thought, and then it’s gone. Thanks for playing!

  2. Reblogged this on Myths of the Mirror and commented:
    The first story in! A little sci-fi from Pensivity.

  3. Sadje says:

    Very interesting story. What happens next?

  4. Interesting. It sort of made me think of current civilization – the more advance we proclaim to be, the more powerful we profess to be the more fleeting the thoughts of being nice. I love when I read something that leaves me lost in thought – wonderful!

  5. blindzanygirl says:

    Brilliant Di

  6. Jackie says:

    A rogue maybe? I like it!

  7. Dude is swole! Very nice response!

  8. mylilplace says:

    I would love to read more of this story! Perfect for the image. πŸ™‚

  9. Pingback: May Speculative Fiction Round-Up | Myths of the Mirror

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