Time to Write: 1st March

This week, Rachel has given us a sentence starter for our prompt.
Time To Write: Sentence Starter | Creative Writing Prompt | Writing Prompt | Creative Writing | Short Story | Flash Fiction | RachelPoli.com

‘Welcome to the family!’
There were smiles and slaps on the back, jovial banter and hugs.
Everyone seemed pleased to meet him, after all, he had eloped with Elise and this was the first time he’d met her kinsfolk.
But something didn’t ring true, and he couldn’t quite put his finger on it.
Elise was beside him in an instant, taking his arm and leading him up the stairs.
‘Aww, look at the newlyweds. So much in love! We need some new blood……..’
‘Quiet Emma!’ reprimanded her father.

Their chambers were at the end of a long corridor.
On entry, everything was cast in shadows, a fire burning in the hearth. It was like something out of medieval times.
Smiling at each other, they undressed and got into bed.
Allan took Elise in his arms and kissed her, his passion rising.
This was the first time for them, having decided that although they’d both had previous partners, they wanted their wedding night to be special.
Elise snuggled into his embrace, her emotions running high. She wanted to savour this moment.
Pressing his lips against her ear, she felt cold to his touch, despite the heat from the fire.
As he drew back to ask if she was OK, she pulled him roughly to her and buried her face into his neck.
The kiss was like nothing he had ever felt. Blood roared in his veins, and he felt he was going to explode.
He felt light headed, distant, floating. Images began to swirl around him, and downstairs  everyone was celebrating their union.
As he drifted into unconsciousness, the flame flickered across Elise, her mouth dripping with his blood. Then he realised what was wrong.
There were no mirrors anywhere.

Advertisements

About pensitivity101

I am a retired number cruncher with a vivid imagination which extends to short stories and poetry. I love to cook and am a bit of a dog whisperer as I get on better with them than people sometimes! Due to a nightmare of a house sale in 2014, 'Home' was a 41 foot narrow boat until April 2017. We made strong friendships both on and off the water, and enjoyed swan and duck families for neighbours. Sadly times change and we now reside in a small bungalow a short distance from the beach on the Lincolnshire coast.
This entry was posted in blogging, Challenge, fiction and tagged , , . Bookmark the permalink.

12 Responses to Time to Write: 1st March

  1. blindzanygirl says:

    Flippin ‘eck Di. This is bloomin goid. What an ending! Great write

  2. Astrid says:

    This was definitely brilliant! Such an a mazing ending.

  3. Sadje says:

    Wow! Wonderful how you have made this into a truly intriguing story.

  4. Rachel says:

    Wow, that took an interesting turn! Nice job.

  5. Pingback: Time To Write: Random Words 14 [Creative Writing Prompt] - Rachel Poli

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s