Tale Weaver #208 – Collapse – 31st January –

This week Michael asks us to consider the notion of collapse.


It had been a difficult year. Times were hard, and there had been layoffs, but so far he’d managed to keep his job.
Luckily, they had some money put aside for emergencies, but even that wouldn’t last forever. They were used to living frugally and there were still a couple of ways to cut their outgoings if they had to.

The Boss had called a meeting of his remaining ten staff.
It was not good news.
Almost in tears, he explained how things were financially and was now asking for any offers of advice or suggestions to keep going.
The Floor Manager suggested everyone took a 10% cut in wages and see if that helped.
The Accounts supervisor put forward last year’s profit sharing dividends be cancelled.
She also suggested cancelling acceptance of certain credit cards as the Bank’s commission on them was unrealistically high for a firm as small as they were.
Utilities said there was a margin for reducing thermostats in the offices and still keep well within the recommended working conditions.
It was a positive meeting and the Boss took it all on board, thanking his loyal staff and promising to keep them in the loop.

A ten percent dip in his salary was not the end of the world, but fast approaching the edge.
At least there would still be money regularly coming in to meet the bills and mortgage.
They’d paid off the car and home improvement loan when they first started to feel the squeeze. It took a chunk out of their savings, but at least it meant they didn’t have to find an extra two hundred and thirty pounds a month for the next three years, and if they had to, they could sell the car and he’d get a bike.

Three months down the line, the staff were gathered for a meeting.
The tide was turning for the business, and whilst they weren’t out of the woods yet, they could see daylight at the end of the tunnel.

He’d had a spring in his step at the bank that day. He’d stumbled and collapsed, dead before he hit the ground.
Massive heart attack they said.
It was ironic. If only he’d had it after he’d seen the Bank Manager with his new business plan and forecasts.

The following day, an urgent meeting was called, chaired by the Boss’s wife.
She looked ill, her eyes red and swollen from crying.
‘I am so sorry……………’ she began, then paused to compose herself.
‘I have no choice but to close the business and sell up……..’


About pensitivity101

I am a retired number cruncher with a vivid imagination and wacky sense of humour which extends to short stories and poetry. I love to cook and am a bit of a dog whisperer as I get on better with them than people sometimes! In November 2020, we lost our beloved Maggie who adopted us as a 7 week old pup in March 2005. We decided to have a photo put on canvas as we had for her predecessor Barney. We now have three pictures of our fur babies on the wall as we found a snapshot of Kizzy, my GSD when Hubby and I first met so had hers done too. On February 24th 2022 we were blessed to find Maya, a 13 week old GSD pup who has made her own place in our hearts. You can follow our training methods, photos and her growth in my blog posts. From 2014 to 2017 'Home' was a 41 foot narrow boat where we made strong friendships both on and off the water. We were close to nature enjoying swan and duck families for neighbours, and it was a fascinating chapter in our lives. We now reside in a small bungalow on the Lincolnshire coast where we have forged new friendships and interests.
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9 Responses to Tale Weaver #208 – Collapse – 31st January –

  1. Sadje says:

    A realistic story. I feel sorry for the poor guy.

    • Based roughly on a true story where the owner of the business suddenly died. The wife met everyone at the door saying the business was being sold and all she could give them was a reference. One employee gave up trying to find similar work and went self employed as a window cleaner. He was very successful.

  2. What a tale. It sort of knocks the wind out of the sails. The hardships are all too familiar, and the ending is so tragic. I feel for all those who are hit with such hard times, especial those who don’t live to see the fruition of their dreams.

  3. Michael says:

    So sad Di after all the sacrifice of the workers. Thanks for sharing with us this week.

  4. msjadeli says:

    What a tragic way for all of that effort and sacrifice by everyone. Well-written story, even if not a happy one.

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