FFfAW Challenge – 199th

199th Challenge

Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers

Week of 01-08 through 01-14-2019


This week’s photo prompt is provided by Jodi McKinney.

Clouds whisper,
Gently warning
Tales of change,
Storm coming.
Secrets, passions,
Blown on the wind,
Clouds gather,
Block the sun.
Trees rustle,
Whispers haunting,
Wind of change,
Cries in the darkness.
Shadows linger,
Like fingers reaching,
Searching, yearning
For signs of change..
Light beckons,
Slowly shining,
Secrets revealed,
Passions waning:
Trees tremble,
Storm passes,
Sun blesses,

Winds whisper.

58 words


About pensitivity101

I am a retired number cruncher with a vivid imagination which extends to short stories and poetry. I love to cook and am a bit of a dog whisperer as I get on better with them than people sometimes! Due to a nightmare of a house sale in 2014, 'Home' was a 41 foot narrow boat until April 2017. We made strong friendships both on and off the water, and enjoyed swan and duck families for neighbours. Sadly times change and we now reside in a small bungalow a short distance from the beach on the Lincolnshire coast.
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14 Responses to FFfAW Challenge – 199th

  1. Sadje says:

    It’s beautiful.

  2. Nicely written. The life cycle of love is visible 🙂

  3. Lynn Love says:

    Enigmatic and poetic writing. Very nice

  4. Abhijit Ray says:

    Nicely done. Clouds are like messenger in the sky. One must be literate enough to read the message.

  5. Ira PT says:

    What a response to the prompt. well done!

  6. This is wonderful, pensitivity101! I really loved this!

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