Time to Write: Sentence Starter #41

I haven’t done one of Rachels’ prompts for a while. so here I am today.

” Surprise!” she sang happily.
Tony was stunned at the change in his wife from the dowdy homemaker he’d left in the morning to the stunning model in the revealing outfit leaving little to the imagination.
Draping herself over him, she smelt of seductive perfume and wanton lust, whispering promises of eroticism, passion and endless pleasure.
He coughed and nervously disentangled himself from her painted talons.
“Er, I’ve got a bit of a surprise for you too,’ he stammered as another man entered the room.
‘Um, this is my boss.’

About pensitivity101

I am a retired number cruncher with a vivid imagination and wacky sense of humour which extends to short stories and poetry. I love to cook and am a bit of a dog whisperer as I get on better with them than people sometimes! We have recently lost our beloved dog Maggie who adopted us as a 7 week old pup in March 2005. We decided to have a photo put on canvas as we had for her predecessor Barney, and now have three pictures of our fur babies on the wall as we found a snapshot of my GSD so had hers done too. From 2014 to 2017 'Home' was a 41 foot narrow boat where we made strong friendships both on and off the water. We were close to nature enjoying swan and duck families for neighbours, and it was a fascinating chapter in our lives. We now reside in a small bungalow on the Lincolnshire coast where we have forged new friendships and interests.
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10 Responses to Time to Write: Sentence Starter #41

  1. The Haunted Wordsmith says:

    “Surprise!” everyone yelled as Great-Grandma Florence slowly walked through the door. Everyone stayed for her burial three days later.

  2. Nova says:

    Gulp, whoops! *bushy red cheecks* πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    That’s why I hate surprises

  3. SarahC says:

    ha! that IS a surprise

  4. Rachel says:

    Great to see your input again! Thanks for sharing. πŸ™‚

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