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Eight year old Hester sat quietly with her hands clasped in her lap.
It was perfect, right down to the eleven stools and fallen log.
Such accuracy, not a single detail had been overlooked.
Harold was stunned.
‘But she’s never been there!’
The doctor turned to Hester and asked if she knew this place.
She didn’t react and continued to look straight ahead.
Doctor Harris then asked Harold where it was.
‘A park close to my grandparents house. It’s not there anymore.’
Hester suddenly stood and taking pen and paper began to draw.
The picture was a farmhouse with cows in one field and two horses frolicking in another.
Doctor Harris almost fainted.
It was her childhood home. She knew it from the intricate detail on the horses, the brand mark easily identifiable on their flanks.
The thought had only fleetingly entered her mind, and Hester had picked up on it.
The child looked up and smiled at them both, her braced teeth glinting in the consulting room lights.
They knew she knew what they were thinking.
177 words.
Great take on the prompt, love your imagination.
Thanks Elizabeth. Hope you’ve had a good day. 🙂
I found it quietly creepy.
So did I when I wrote it!
Leaves a lot to the imagination. Past life regression?
Maybe, or telepathy perhaps.
Ooh, eerie but very believable.
Thanks Sally.
Wonderful. Creepy, but also a superpower I would like to have 🙂
Thanks Iain. I wouldn’t mind having the power either sometimes, but even more importantly perhaps the power to turn it off! 🙂
Something odd going on here! Nice one.
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Hester is damn scary. Now I am imagining her drawing that farmhouse for Dr. Harris, and a dead body lying there, with the doctor standing over it 🙂
She is isn’t she. If Dr Harris has such a memory, then maybe.
Ooh, a child born with telepathy. I don’t think I’d want to know what everyone was thinking. There can be plusses and minuses to that ability. Good writing, Pensitivity. 🙂 — Suzanne
Thanks
Eek. I know how terrifying that would be. But think of the crimefighting possibilites. Great story
Thank you!