Saturday Mix – Lucky Dip, 18 November 2017

Sarah has reached into her mystery bag and pulled out a Shadorma!
Your challenge, is to write a Shadorma poem about an emotion.

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Oh. I haven’t done many of these, so here is my reminder guide line
3/5/3/3/7/5
6 lines, and the above is the number of syllables per line.
O….. K……………..

Love is Ours

Your heart’s mine,
I will cherish it,
Honour it,
Protect it
Until my own stops beating,
Take care of mine too.

 

About pensitivity101

I am a retired number cruncher with a vivid imagination and wacky sense of humour which extends to short stories and poetry. I love to cook and am a bit of a dog whisperer as I get on better with them than people sometimes! We have recently lost our beloved dog Maggie who adopted us as a 7 week old pup in March 2005. We decided to have a photo put on canvas as we had for her predecessor Barney, and now have three pictures of our fur babies on the wall as we found a snapshot of my GSD so had hers done too. From 2014 to 2017 'Home' was a 41 foot narrow boat where we made strong friendships both on and off the water. We were close to nature enjoying swan and duck families for neighbours, and it was a fascinating chapter in our lives. We now reside in a small bungalow on the Lincolnshire coast where we have forged new friendships and interests.
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8 Responses to Saturday Mix – Lucky Dip, 18 November 2017

  1. Reena Saxena says:

    I like the last line 🙂

  2. teandpaper says:

    Beautiful and romantic!

  3. weejars says:

    Just stunning Di. This brought a tear to my eye and warmed my heart. I hope you don’t mind but I also read it to my girlfriends who I was away with this weekend and they loved it too. What a beautiful shadorma. Thanks for joining in the Saturday Mix. I always enjoy reading your responses.

    • Thanks Sarah. I am so glad you enjoyed it, and chuffed you decided to share it with your friends. Thank you so much. It means a lot, and I;m pleased you enjoy my writings. 🙂

  4. Anonymous says:

    loved it

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