FFfAW Challenge-Week of 8-01-2017

This week is the 126th Challenge for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers (thanks Joy)

The photo prompt is provided by TJ Paris.
The water was beautifully clear and inviting.
Dumping their gear and clothes, they dove in, revelling in the refreshing senses against naked skin as they kissed and frolicked amongst the cooling waves.
The crystal droplets of moisture on their tanned skin glittered like diamonds in the sun, the tanginess of the salt teased and tantalised the tongue as they savoured each other, lost in the moment as their passion rose.
But it was short-lived.

From the watching tower, the lifeguards shot into action.
‘Here we go again, Sid. Two kids nekkin’ in the water totally oblivious of the tide and under currents. When will they learn?’

106 words (keep forgetting to add them!)

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About pensitivity101

I am a retired number cruncher with a vivid imagination which extends to short stories and poetry. I love to cook and am a bit of a dog whisperer as I get on better with them than people sometimes! Due to a nightmare of a house sale in 2014, 'Home' was a 41 foot narrow boat until April 2017. We made strong friendships both on and off the water, and enjoyed swan and duck families for neighbours. Sadly times change and we now reside in a small bungalow a short distance from the beach on the Lincolnshire coast.
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8 Responses to FFfAW Challenge-Week of 8-01-2017

  1. Iain Kelly says:

    Ha, shouldn’t laugh but I loved the way the life guards reacted šŸ™‚

  2. Hahahaha! Love the twist at the end! Kids aren’t mature enough to think of things like that when they are in the heat of passion! LOL! Cute story!

  3. marja says:

    Lol being young is full of dangers

  4. Varad says:

    What do those morons know about young love? Everything from when they were young, you say? Uh ok then, stupid kids šŸ˜€
    Well done, P101. Gave me a chuckle with the last line.
    Click to read about the last men on earth

  5. …and the necking time gets cut short šŸ™‚

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