July 27: Flash Fiction Challenge – Crystalline

July 27, 2017 prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story using the word crystalline. It can be used in typical forms or in creative ways (like the name of a town). What meaning does it hold for the story or character(s)? Go where the prompt leads!

You can find more details of the challenge here:

https://carrotranch.com/2017/07/28/july-27-flash-fiction-challenge-2/

The advertisement said they could do this, though it wasn’t cheap.
Alighting from the taxi, her initial impression was uncertainty, but hugging her precious load to her chest, she entered the building.
The cost of five thousand pounds almost took her breath away, but it would be worth it as she would be able to carry her love about her person forever.
She selected her preference and was told to collect it in seven days.
The end result was fabulous.
Her father’s ashes were now in the crystalline form of a man-made diamond in the pendant around her neck.

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About pensitivity101

I am a retired number cruncher with a vivid imagination and wacky sense of humour which extends to short stories and poetry. I love to cook and am a bit of a dog whisperer as I get on better with them than people sometimes! We have an elderly dog called Maggie who adopted us as a 7 week old pup in March 2005. From 2014 to 2017 'Home' was a 41 foot narrow boat where we made strong friendships both on and off the water. We were close to nature enjoying swan and duck families for neighbours, and it was a fascinating chapter in our lives. We now reside in a small bungalow on the Lincolnshire coast where we have forged new friendships and interests.
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11 Responses to July 27: Flash Fiction Challenge – Crystalline

  1. susanzutautas says:

    Beautiful!

  2. Charli Mills says:

    An amazing an unexpected gem! I’d much rather have something sparkly than an urn of ashes. Can you imagine the implications, though? Instead of passing down the family heirloom of “Grandma’s ring” you could actually pass down Grandma!

  3. Norah says:

    What an interesting use of ashes, and the prompt.

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