Saturday Mix–10 June 2017: What If

Thanks Teresa.
I often ask myself this question and glad I’m here where I am rather than somewhere else because of it!
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What if she’d stayed?
Would it have made
Any difference to
The outcome with you?

Did you treat her right?
Drunk every night,
She cleaned up your mess,
Giving more than her best.

Love made her fall,
She gave you her all,
Provided a home,
Yet you left her alone.

She wasted ten years,
Cried oceans of tears,
You weren’t there to see
How she yearned to be free.

Her love made her ill,
Such a bitter pill,
But you didn’t care,
She was just ‘there’.

Everyone knew,
That was, except you,
She left when she could
Rather than when she should.

But what if she’d stayed?
You’d still have strayed,
Cheated and lied,
She’d most likely have died.

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About pensitivity101

Retired number cruncher with a vivid imagination, loves to cook, favourite food everything especially chocolate and jelly babies. Best friends are Hubby and Dog, Bro, MSM and our Dominoes Friend aka MOH (and his dog). Also a bit of a dog whisperer as I get on better with them than people sometimes! Due to a nightmare of a house sale in 2014, 'Home' was a 41 foot narrow boat until April 2017. We enjoyed swan and duck families for neighbours but times change and we are once again house hunting.
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5 Responses to Saturday Mix–10 June 2017: What If

  1. Michael says:

    I think you explored the ‘what if’ scenario well Di….good one..

  2. Teresa says:

    Very well done. Sadly, this is all too realistic.

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