Thursday Photoprompt: GOLD

Thanks Sue for an awe-inspiring photo this week.

Like this bird in flight,
Take me away from this life.
Lift me high on the wing
Towards the golden rays of sunset.

Envelop me with mystic warmth,
Ease my lowly shattered spirit,
Let me join the sky to meet
The stars when they dazzle on soft dark velvet.

Nothing to get in the way,
Open seas and open courses,
The liquid path inviting as it mesmerises,
But I cannot walk on water to tread it.


About pensitivity101

I am a retired number cruncher with a vivid imagination which extends to short stories and poetry. I love to cook and am a bit of a dog whisperer as I get on better with them than people sometimes! Due to a nightmare of a house sale in 2014, 'Home' was a 41 foot narrow boat until April 2017. We made strong friendships both on and off the water, and enjoyed swan and duck families for neighbours. Sadly times change and we now reside in a small bungalow a short distance from the beach on the Lincolnshire coast.
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19 Responses to Thursday Photoprompt: GOLD

  1. Sue Vincent says:

    This is really quite poignant and beautiful x

  2. Ritu says:

    This is so beautiful πŸ’œ

  3. willowdot21 says:

    So beautiful, love thisπŸ’—πŸ’œ

  4. Isabel Caves says:

    The stars dazzling on dark velvet…beautiful.

  5. Bernadette says:

    Your writing is an elegant prayer.

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  7. robertcday says:

    I like what Bernadette said – this is a very elegant prayer. Benedictus Pensitivity101. πŸ˜‰
    Kindness – Robert.

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