Sunday Strange microfiction challenge

This painting is by Gabriel von Max

Thanks Jane . Definitely an interesting one.
https://janedougherty.wordpress.com/2017/02/12/sunday-strange-microfiction-challenge/

creepy-12-feb

Come out of the shadows:
You need the light more than I,
Blind as I am I can see you lurking,
Take the lamp if you dare
And see what I see.

Betrayal on the wind of change,
Something different and not understood,
These stone steps lead to my destiny,
Yet you will not come forth
To show me the way.

Are you afraid of the dark?
Or the horrors you imagine there,
Each lamp is a test for those who hide behind you,
Only four left,
This one is for you.

The branches at my feet lay beaten
Having drawn blood against my back
But I did not cry out.
Not for me to release the spirits
Entrusted within my soul.

But you and your followers tortured me,
So here I sit, with my lanterns aglow.
You are all doomed in this place,
Whilst I, like the flame,
Will rise to freedom, leaving you in the dark.

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About pensitivity101

Retired number cruncher with a vivid imagination, loves to cook, favourite food everything especially chocolate and jelly babies. Best friends are Hubby and Dog, Bro, MSM and our Dominoes Friend aka MOH (and his dog). Also a bit of a dog whisperer as I get on better with them than people sometimes! Due to a nightmare of a house sale in 2014, 'Home' was a 41 foot narrow boat until April 2017. We enjoyed swan and duck families for neighbours but times change and we are once again house hunting.
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8 Responses to Sunday Strange microfiction challenge

  1. You turned what I saw as a creepy scene into a hopeful one. Well done’!

  2. That’s a great take on an interesting painting.

  3. polarflares says:

    Still Sunday here in Anchorage AK. Had some fun with this one. Thanks

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