Writespiration #102 52 Weeks in 52 Words Week 6

Oh Sacha. This is a good one!

52-word-challengeAnd the prompt is…………………

Use the following theme:
That moment you see your ex with their hot new bit and you look like a turd.

‘Well? What was she like?
‘Tall, beautiful, willowy,’
‘Hanging on to his arm like a limpet, breathing in his heavy aftershave (I hated it by the way), sucking up to every lying word.’
‘Did they see you?’
‘How do you feel?’
‘Like the bun to her hotdog, pale and stodgy’.


About pensitivity101

I am a retired number cruncher with a vivid imagination which extends to short stories and poetry. I love to cook and am a bit of a dog whisperer as I get on better with them than people sometimes! Due to a nightmare of a house sale in 2014, 'Home' was a 41 foot narrow boat until April 2017. We made strong friendships both on and off the water, and enjoyed swan and duck families for neighbours. Sadly times change and we now reside in a small bungalow a short distance from the beach on the Lincolnshire coast.
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6 Responses to Writespiration #102 52 Weeks in 52 Words Week 6

  1. Barb Knowles says:

    This is really good. I love the “I hated it by the way” line!

  2. Sacha Black says:

    I agree with Barb, I loved that line too. Another fab entry.

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