January 5: Flash Fiction Challenge : Rattle

Here’s Charli’s challenge this week:
You can check out her original post here:

https://wordpress.com/read/feeds/12307624/posts/1287083454

January 5, 2017 prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about a rattling sound. It can be an intimidating sound of protest, a disorienting loud sound, a musical expression or a gentle baby’s toy. Go where the prompt leads you.
jan-5thIt was annoying and kept her awake at night.
Nothing was loose, but there was a constant rattling outside.
The boat was secure, ropes tight as the wind blew them against the jetty.
By torchlight, nothing could be seen and as if a phantom, the noise stopped as soon as her head appeared in the hatchway.
On closure, it started again.
She groaned.
Next day, all was revealed.
The wind had been rattling zip tongues against the hull.
With crochet hook and wool, she produced six-inch anti-tapping devices, neat little squares to place between zip and metal.
Perfect.

Note:
True story: e
ach square took less than half an hour to make, and are still dangling!

 

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About pensitivity101

Retired number cruncher with a vivid imagination, loves to cook, favourite food everything especially chocolate and jelly babies. Best friends are Hubby and Dog, Bro and our Dominoes Friend aka MOH (and his dog). Also a bit of a dog whisperer as I get on better with them than people sometimes! Due to a nightmare of a house sale in 2014, 'Home' is now a 41 foot narrow boat. It's different and having swan and duck families for neighbours is much more relaxing on the eye not to mention the ears!
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3 Responses to January 5: Flash Fiction Challenge : Rattle

  1. Charli Mills says:

    Oh, how frustrating to have the sound stop upon inspection only to start again after. A clever solution and truly a boat BOATS!

  2. Pingback: Rattling Words « Carrot Ranch Communications

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