December 8: Flash Fiction Challenge

December 8, 2016 prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write using the word gander as a verb. A gander is a male goose, yet the Old English etymology of the word suggests it was once gandra which described a waterbird with a long neck (like a crane). In 1912, it became the act of taking a long look. What is the long look your story or character is considering?

Such is Charli’s challenge this week
https://wordpress.com/read/feeds/12307624/posts/1253761193

flash-fiction-8-decHe felt like the village idiot, walking down the street with a goose under his arm.
What Missy Tomkins wanted with it he had no idea. Nearly a hundred years old, it was unlikely she was going to cook a family dinner.
He approached her run-down cottage, and the gate fell off its hinges as he pushed it.
Terrific. Something else to fix.
‘Wha’s ya got thar Tom?’ she croaked from her rocking chair.
‘The goose you wanted Miz Tomkins’ he replied.
‘Goose? I nay wanted a goose, boy! I need ya to have a gander at tha oven’!’

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About pensitivity101

I am a retired number cruncher with a vivid imagination which extends to short stories and poetry. I love to cook and have a terrible sweet tooth for jelly babies or fruit pastilles. Best friends are Hubby, our dog Maggie, Bro in NZ, MSM and MOH (and his dog). I am also a bit of a dog whisperer as I get on better with them than people sometimes! Due to a nightmare of a house sale in 2014, 'Home' was a 41 foot narrow boat until April 2017. We made strong friendships both on and off the water, and enjoyed swan and duck families for neighbours. Sadly times change and we were once again house hunting until September. We now reside in a small bungalow a short distance from the beach on the Lincolnshire coast.
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15 Responses to December 8: Flash Fiction Challenge

  1. Michael says:

    I loved this one…very clever Di…

  2. You made me laugh! Thanks!!

  3. A. E. Robson says:

    Oh, I love this. Good giggle.

  4. denmaniacs4 says:

    Very nice indeed.

  5. Charli Mills says:

    What a great couple of characters! I could just see the man walking and grumbling with a captive goose. This makes me think of how actions and dialog reveal a character’s looks so much better than description. And I love the humorous twist!

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